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What is the role of the vitamin

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Vitamins are special materials in foods, fruits and vegetables which are vital for our bodies and vitamin deficiency leads to many diseases so it is important to get enough vitamin every day. Vitamins have a big role in our bodies and thank fully people are becoming aware of their role. Therefore, they are paying more attention to this subject more than past. As a result, people are taking vitamin supplements such as vitamin tablets, syrup and ampoule. Doctors prescribe different kinds of vitamins for pregnant women and old people as well. On the other hand, people take care of their health including mentally and physically thus they can refresh themselves by vitamins. Thereby, we will not have many diseases which are associated with vitamin deficiency in the future because currently people are getting enough vitamins every day.
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vitamin
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have a
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big
role in our bodies and thank
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people
are becoming aware of their role.
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, they are paying more attention to this subject more than past.
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people
are taking
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vitamin
supplements such as
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tablets, syrup and
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ampoule
. Doctors prescribe
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different
kinds of
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vitamins
for pregnant women and
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old
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people
as well
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,
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people
take care of their health including mentally and
physically
thus
they can refresh themselves by
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vitamins
. Thereby, we will not have
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diseases which
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vitamin
deficiency in the future
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people
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IELTS essay What is the role of the vitamin

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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