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what is the recipe of the happiness

what is the recipe of the happiness Do2N6

Everyone have their own life as their recipe of the happiness. However, the scientists found that they feel the happiness in some typical ways. First, I want to share you that everyone have two lives, and when you lose one, you will realize that you just have one. Therefor, you must learn how to be happy before it lately. In addition, my mom tough me that i have to be grateful for life because I still breath when I wake up. The happiness come when you just have done normal things like enjoy your meal, feel your day or do pleasure for the other. Last thing I want to say that people can judge you but they can't live for your life. So that you must be yourself.

Everyone The pronoun 'Everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 life as their recipe of the happiness. However
, the scientists found that they feel the happiness in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 typical ways. First
, I want to share you that everyone have two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
, and when you lose one, you will realize that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 have one. Therefor, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 learn how to be happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it lately. In addition
, my mom tough me that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be grateful for life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I still
Did you mean the verb "breathe"? 'breath' is a noun.breathe
breath
 when I wake up. The happiness This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 when you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 have done normal things like enjoy your meal, feel your day or do pleasure for the other. Last thing I want to say that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can judge you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 for your life. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be yourself. 