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Under today news and issues and respect for others. what might have caused this situation? how to improve it?

Under today news and issues and respect for others. what might have caused this situation? how to improve it? RV22M
No one can deny that, In this scenario people are not only getting rude but also using vulger languages and disrespect their elder, main reason behind this problem from my opinion is social-media and lack of parents guidance. This eassy will discuss reason back of why people getting anti-social and not behaving good with others along with possible solutions. To commence with cases, there are multifarious grounds, initially social media is main reason. As widely acknowledged that most of the masses get inspired from movies, songs and try to copy them, which results they started behaving and acting like that character which they saw in mobile or television, for instance if any actor play a role of 'bad boy' in movie which are more popular movies these the days, and youngster try become copy that character through which they behave badly with others. Moreover, not only social media but also guardian are accountable for anti-social behaviour because they do not give proper guidance to there kids due to which they become like this. To resolve this issue, schools and parents should take care of their children and also do not promote contant on social media which can affect their chid, and also schools should provide proper knowledge about these type of thing through which person can become good citizen. To conculde it, parents should take care of their children and provide them proper guidance about these things, not only parents but also whole society should take care of that they should not promote that contant which can harm the person behaviour.
No one can deny that, In this scenario
people
are not
only
getting rude
but
also
using
vulger
languages and disrespect their elder, main reason behind this problem from my opinion is social-media and lack of
parents
guidance. This
eassy
will discuss reason back of why
people
getting anti-social and not behaving
good
with others along with possible solutions.

To commence with cases, there are multifarious grounds,
initially
social media is main reason. As
widely
acknowledged that most of the masses
get
inspired from movies, songs and try to copy them, which results they
started
behaving and acting like that character which they
saw
in mobile or television,
for instance
if any actor play a role of '
bad
boy' in movie which are more popular movies these the days, and youngster
try become
copy that character through which they behave
badly
with others.

Moreover
, not
only
social media
but
also
guardian are accountable for anti-social
behaviour
because
they do not give proper guidance to
there
kids due to which they become like this.

To resolve this issue, schools and
parents
should take care of their children and
also
do not promote
contant
on social media which can affect their
chid
, and
also
schools should provide proper knowledge about these type of thing through which person can become
good
citizen.

To
conculde
it,
parents
should take care of their children and provide them proper guidance about these things, not
only
parents
but
also
whole society should take care of that they should not promote that
contant
which can harm the person
behaviour
.
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IELTS essay Under today news and issues and respect for others. what might have caused this situation? how to improve it?

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261 words
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