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What do you think are advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas?

What do you think are advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas? BgaY9
A number of students travel to foreign countries for better education each year. The trend is increasing more and more among youths with no sign of stopping. While there are many benefits of studying overseas, there are some drawbacks as well. This essay discusses the same. One of the major reasons students move to foreign nations like the USA and Canada is because of the quality of education they provide. The bachelor's and master's degrees from universities in these countries are recognized in almost every part of the world. Moreover, the laboratories and kinds of research and research materials are readily available in these countries. At the same time, students are exposed to more advanced technology and training which is likely to help them apply them in their home country in the future. Similarly, they can learn the cultures and norms of the countries they traveled to study and hone their interpersonal skills. Overseas students are more likely to be financially and emotionally independent over time. While there are many advantages of overseas study, there are some drawbacks as well. Citizens of native land are generally threatened by the presence of international students in a large number which leads to racist behaviors towards them. The cases are increasing more in European countries as well as countries like the USA and UK. At the same time, students feel nostalgic and homesick when they are away from home which can lead to various mental health issues such as anxiety and depression. Moreover, the cost of studying in foreign countries is huge as the taxes imposed on international students are generally higher than the native students. In my opinion, the increasing trend of studying overseas can be really advantageous if international students are imposed with comfortable government policies and they are encouraged to return to their home countries after the study where they could apply the things they learned.
A number of
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students
travel to foreign
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countries
for better education each year. The trend is increasing more and more among youths with no
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sign
of stopping. While there are
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many
benefits of studying
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overseas
, there are
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some
drawbacks
as well
. This essay discusses the same. One of the major reasons
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students
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move
to foreign nations like the USA and Canada is
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because
of the quality of education they provide. The bachelor's and master's degrees from universities in these
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countries
are recognized
in almost every part of the world.
Moreover
, the laboratories and kinds of research and research materials are
readily
available in these
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countries
. At the same time,
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students
are exposed
to more advanced technology and training which is likely to
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help
them apply them in their home
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country
in the future.
Similarly
, they can learn the cultures and norms of the
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countries
they traveled to study and hone their interpersonal
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skills
.
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Overseas
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students
are more likely to be
financially
and
emotionally
independent over time. While there are
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many
advantages of
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overseas
study, there are
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some
drawbacks
as well
. Citizens of native land are
generally
threatened by the presence of international
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students
in a large number which leads to racist behaviors towards them. The cases are increasing more in European
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countries
as well
as
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countries
like the USA and UK. At the same time,
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students
feel nostalgic and homesick when they are away from home which can lead to various mental health issues such as anxiety and depression.
Moreover
, the cost of studying in foreign
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countries
is huge as the taxes imposed on international
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students
are
generally
higher than the native
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students
. In my opinion, the increasing trend of studying
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overseas
can be
really
advantageous if international
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students
are imposed
with comfortable
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government
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policies and
they
are encouraged
to return to their home
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countries
after the study where they could apply the things they learned.
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IELTS essay What do you think are advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas?

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316 words
6.0
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