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what is the pros and cons video games

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Undoubtedly, nowadays video games are turning to trend among youth. there are a lot of positive and negative sides for youngsters. this following essay will analyze both sides too. On the one hand, video games turned to one part of life in life of youngsters. There are several disadvantages for young humans. For example, video game brings health issues such as the ability of see is diminished, beside that it can bring some brain problems too, like, the ability of remember decreases and the brain works slowly when you play a lot. with that reasons you can not increase you study level and it decreases. there are all of the negative sides of playing video games. However, there are several advantages has too. For example, if you are tired you can chillout and you can enjoy playing video game with your friends, it is better way to spend time more than spent time with doing nothing. Beside that, there are some communities which are earn money from video game. Some of them earn money from creating video game and others earn money with playing it in big competitions. In conclusion, we analyzed both sides of video game, and we can say that easily playing video game is superior when you play it in your free time amd with some breaks.
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following essay will analyze both
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On the one hand,
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video
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turned to one part of life in life of youngsters. There are several disadvantages for young humans.
For example
,
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video
game brings health issues such as the ability of
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is diminished
, beside that it can bring
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brain problems too, like, the ability of remember decreases and the brain works
slowly
when you play a lot.
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with
that reasons you can not increase you study level and it decreases.
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there
are
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However
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and you can enjoy
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game with your friends, it is
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way to spend time more than spent time with doing nothing. Beside that, there are
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communities which are
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big
competitions.

In conclusion
, we analyzed both
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game, and we can say that
easily
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game is superior when you play it in your free time
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IELTS essay what is the pros and cons video games

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
220 words
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