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I have always been passionate about laws since my childhood. When I started growing up, I found my passion was really about helping less fortunate people. I have always cherished my aspirations to become a social worker who can help others and enhance society. One of the interesting childhood memories of mine is that i used to play a judge and make sound "order order", while playing with my childhood friends. I always had a tendency to become someone who has abilities to spread positivity among people. I noticed another thing effectively that many people have been deprived of their fundamental rights because of insufficient help and support. In many societies, women are expected to be submissive and quiet about their fundamental rights. If they raise their voice against the violence, they might be assaulted by their family members, as well as abusive partners. I want to be someone who can help people to get justice and take action against the violence of lawful activity. Considering all these factors, I made a decision to pursue a career in the social work field which compelled me to study law. I have also observed that the subjects focus on entire society, as well as people’s problems. Furthermore, I also noticed one thing effectively that in my society, many educated people do not raise their voice against injustice and unlawful activity. Consequently, the percentage of crime has escalated. Moreover, I want to build a nation where people get justice and have faith strongly in the legal system.

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