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give an opinion about using the computer

give an opinion about using the computer 5LVMQ

I believe, computers are playing an important role of our modern lives nowadays. Because of the increasing technology, people around the world know how to use it easily. Despite the disadvantages of using the computers, they have some advantages for us too. Here these are some of my opinions about the benefits of using the computer i would like to give: First of all, computer is a useful and intelligent tool which make our life more easier. It has people have

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use
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First of all
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make
 our life Use only "easier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.easier
more easier
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