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What is the main reason for liking a hometown other than the fact you were born there?

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I reckon, we all love our hometowns, because we were raised there. I am personally used to this place and I have become very comfortable with it. I have created some very pleasant memories here – met friends, family, my first love, first academic achievements. In my hometown I was formed physiologically as an individual. I reckon, we all love our hometowns, because we were raised there. I am personally used to this place and I have become very comfortable with it. I have created some very pleasant memories here – met friends, family, my first love, first academic achievements. In my hometown I was formed physiologically as an individual. I reckon, we all love our hometowns, because we were raised there. I am personally used to this place and I have become very comfortable with it. I have created some very pleasant memories here – met friends, family, my first love, first academic achievements. In my hometown I was formed physiologically as an individual.
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pleasant memories here
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met friends, family, my
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first
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love
,
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first
academic achievements. In my
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hometown
I
was formed
physiologically
as an individual. I reckon, we all
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love
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometowns
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we
were raised
there. I am
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to this place and I have become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
comfortable with it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
pleasant memories here
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
met friends, family, my
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first
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love
,
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first
academic achievements. In my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
I
was formed
physiologically
as an individual.

I reckon, we all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometowns
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we
were raised
there. I am
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to this place and I have become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
comfortable with it.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
pleasant memories here
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
met friends, family, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
first
academic achievements. In my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
I
was formed
physiologically
as an individual.
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IELTS essay What is the main reason for liking a hometown other than the fact you were born there?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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