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In most countries Multi-National Companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging the quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In most countries Multi-National Companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging the quality of life. A0g3
Globalization have paved the way for the growth of multi-national companies. Their products make significant changes on day-to-day basis. These changes are frequently questioned if they are ruining or enhancing the lives? Organizations have made the product available across the globe likewise the dependency on them have increased which can have serious effect on economy. As a matter of fact, globalization has helped these companies to make their products available anywhere. In addition, Wide range of the products helps the people to choose according to their likeness and taste which is in favor of consumers. For example: Nowadays, people do not have to depend on one brand even if it goes out-of-stock. These corporations have provided multiple employment opportunities and foreign investments to the country they sell the products. In this technological advancement era, wider options to buyers has solidly amplified the life status. However, the options made available in the market has increased the wants of the consumers. These corporations urge the people to buy unwanted things which would increase the chances of debt. Evidently, dependency on those institutions are increased whereas, the local producers are deeply affected by this cause. For instance: most people tend to buy foreign good rather than locally produced. Sense of dissatisfaction is created on the products that the people currently own. Consequently, individuals become unhappy with their lives. To Conclude, we live in a period where we are connected throughout the globe by various platforms. It is necessary to have wide range of products available by considering those people who live in foreign countries. I strongly disagree that Multi-national companies harm the quality of life, instead they enhance by providing choices and knowledge to everyone.
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companies
. Their
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products
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make
significant
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changes
on day-to-day basis. These
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changes
are
frequently
questioned if they are ruining or enhancing the
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lives
? Organizations have made the
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product
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available
across the globe
likewise
the dependency on them have increased which can have serious effect on economy.

As a matter of fact, globalization has
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helped
these
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companies
to
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make
their
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products
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available
anywhere.
In addition
, Wide range of the
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products
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helps
the
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people
to choose according to their likeness and taste which is in favor of consumers.
For example
: Nowadays,
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people
do not
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have to
depend on one brand even if it goes out-of-stock. These corporations have provided multiple employment opportunities and foreign investments to the country they sell the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. In this technological advancement era, wider options to buyers has
solidly
amplified the life status.

However
, the options made
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available
in the market has increased the wants of the consumers. These corporations urge the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
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buy
unwanted things which would increase the chances of debt.
Evidently
, dependency on those institutions
are increased
whereas, the local producers are
deeply
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affected
by this cause.
For instance
: most
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people
tend to
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buy
foreign
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good
rather
than
locally
produced. Sense of dissatisfaction
is created
on the
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products
that the
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people
currently
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own
.
Consequently
, individuals become unhappy with their
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lives
.

To Conclude
, we
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live
in a period where we
are connected
throughout the globe by various platforms. It is necessary to have wide range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
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available
by considering those
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people
who
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live
in foreign countries. I
strongly
disagree that Multi-national
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companies
harm the quality of life,
instead
they enhance by providing choices and knowledge to everyone.
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IELTS essay In most countries Multi-National Companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging the quality of life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.5
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