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What is the best thing someone has ever given to you?

What is the best thing someone has ever given to you? AJk7x

Every gift I have received is my favorite to be honored and used until now. But the most unforgettable memory is the moment when I received a ring from my best friend. She is residing in Canada, far from me a half of the Earth now. She has gone to foreign for 4 years. We studied in high school together, had a close relationship and experienced beautiful youth. But, someday she told me that her parents have to leave VietNam to reside in Canada. It was an unexpected thing to me and I cried a lot. We had made a vow attending a university, traveling along beautiful places in VietNam, . . . She gave me a ring engraved with her name as a promise that will come back to fulfill her promise. The ring is a valuable gift of my best friend that has special meaning to me. It contains not only my nostalgia, but also the waiting for her return.

Every gift I have received is my favorite to be honored
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 the most unforgettable memory is the moment when I received a ring from my best friend.

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