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Violence is becoming a trend in the film world. One of the audience groups being primary objects of film companies are teenagers. They tend to be interested in brutal games involving guns, blood, hunting and killing each other. To satisfy their favourites, programs, videos, and films containing violence content are made widely. There are many famous films labeled 16+ such as: Van Helsing; The Umbrella Academy; The Fall; . . . Despite containing blood scenes, today film makers try to make it less violence and more concentrated on building bavery heroes fighting for poor people, independence, beautiful and moral aims. I think action films are quite attractive but I am still worried about managing teenagers watching these kinds of films.

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