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What is success for me and the ways to achieve it?

What is success for me and the ways to achieve it? r6LXn
There are a plenty designation and determination of the word success, so every person understands it in various ways. Especially for me it means the achievement of something desired, planned or attempted or the gain of fame or property. Success can mean sundry things to absolutely different people. Success can also be measured in a variety of ways. Individuals strive for their own forms of success. This essay will explain what success means to me as well as the ways to achieve it. To begin with, success for me is the impact I make on community and authority that surround me. I can confidently say that physical and mental wellness have the greatest impact on person’s further success. Besides that, activities that engage and energize us are driven by our innate natural talents. Perhaps you are a perfect strategist and visionary, either maybe you are an adrenaline lover, thus you like plenty of various interesting, breathtaking and exciting projects.
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forms of
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what
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means to me
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with,
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for me is the impact I
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on community and authority that surround me. I can
confidently
say that physical and mental wellness have the greatest impact on person’s
further
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success
.
Besides
that, activities that engage and energize us
are driven
by our innate natural talents. Perhaps you are a perfect strategist and visionary, either maybe you are an adrenaline lover,
thus
you like
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of various interesting, breathtaking and exciting projects.
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IELTS essay What is success for me and the ways to achieve it?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
159 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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