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Task 2 writing , water pollution.

Task 2 writing , water pollution. VYl5O
Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas remains an ongoing concern to members of society who find it fundamental and crucial to protect the environment. The writer will aim to discuss the potential causes of water pollution and in what way this could impact animal life and human society. In my opinion potential causes of water pollution could be identified as poor recycling, fuel spillages and faecal water dumping. Water pollution can have a drastic effect on animal life which may cause anminals to become unwell or even result in death. Fuel spillages within rivers, lakes and seas is often due to the transportation and storage of oil containers which can often have leakage, which then pollutes water resources. There has been evidence to show that a high percentage of the world's sewage often finds its way into seas, rivers and lakes and will then go untreated, increasing rates of water pollution. Poor recycling waste results in plastic debris polluting the water resources and causing harm to animal life. It is very common for sea animals, fish, seabirds and marine mammals to either become entangled or inject plastic debris, which results in harm to animal life. Water pollution can have a dramatic negative effect on human society, contamintaed water can lead to the spread of infectious diseases. It can be seriosuly damaging to human society to drink untreated water, as our body will respond immediately to this and begin to show symptoms of rejection to the untreated water. In conclusion, I strongly agree that water pollution effects both animal life and human society negatively. I feel it is very evident that water pollution remains an ongoing issue and will remain a significant concern for people attempting to protect the environment. It will be extremely difficult to tackle the management of water pollution if the causes mentioned above are not addressed.
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Pollution
of rivers, lakes and
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seas
remains an ongoing concern to members of
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society
who find it fundamental and crucial to protect the environment. The writer will aim to discuss the potential
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causes
of
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water
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pollution
and in what way this could impact
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animal
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life
and
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human
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society
. In my opinion potential
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causes
of
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water
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pollution
could
be identified
as poor recycling, fuel spillages and
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faecal
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water
dumping.

Water
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pollution
can have a drastic effect on
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animal
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life
which may
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cause
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anminals
to become unwell or even result in death. Fuel spillages within rivers, lakes and
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seas
is
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often
due to the transportation and storage of oil containers which can
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often
have leakage, which then pollutes
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water
resources. There has been evidence to
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show
that a high percentage of the world's sewage
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often
finds its way into
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seas
, rivers and lakes and will then go untreated, increasing rates of
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water
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pollution
. Poor recycling waste results in plastic debris polluting the
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water
resources and causing harm to
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animal
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life
. It is
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very
common for
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sea
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animals
, fish, seabirds and marine mammals to either become entangled or inject plastic debris, which results in harm to
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animal
life.

Water
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pollution
can have a dramatic
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negative
effect on
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human
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society
,
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contamintaed
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water
can lead to the spread of infectious diseases. It can be
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seriosuly
damaging to
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human
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society
to drink untreated
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water
, as our body will respond immediately to this and
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begin
to
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show
symptoms of rejection to the untreated water.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
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agree
that
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water
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pollution
effects both
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animal
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life
and
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human
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society
negatively
. I feel it is
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very
evident that
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water
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pollution
remains an ongoing issue and will remain a significant concern for
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people
attempting to protect the environment. It will be
extremely
difficult to tackle the management of
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water
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pollution
if the
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causes
mentioned above are not addressed.
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IELTS essay Task 2 writing , water pollution.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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