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What is one thing that you like about one of your parents? How does this quality make him or her a better person? What have you learned from this parent that helps you in life?

What is one thing that you like about one of your parents? How does this quality make him or her a better person? What have you learned from this parent that helps you in life? qV3LG
My mother takes role for my life, Because she is the only person that understand my situation when I am in big problem. Therefore, I really appreciate my mom. She is not only a conscientious, and disipline woman, But she raise me with such a delightful way. I learned everything that crucial from my mom. She always thwarting me from being deliquent teenager that follows nowadays millenial silly action, which in my opinion this could help me to be success people in the future.
My mother takes role for my life,
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Because
she is the
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only
person that understand my situation when I am in
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big
problem.
Therefore
, I
really
appreciate my mom. She is not
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only
a conscientious, and
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disipline
woman,
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But
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "raises", "raised".
raise
me with such a delightful way. I learned everything that crucial from my mom.
Did you mean "She's always thwarting", "She is always thwarting", or "She was always thwarting"?
She always thwarting
me from being
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deliquent
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teenager
that follows nowadays
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millenial
silly action, which in my opinion this could
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help
me to be success
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people
in the future.

IELTS essay What is one thing that you like about one of your parents? How does this quality make him or her a better person? What have you learned from this parent that helps you in life?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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