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in today globalized world, countries should protect their customs. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

in today globalized world, countries should protect their customs. r8dK6

As a result of the small village world, significant attention should be drawn by countries to conserve their bygone generations’ traditions. From my point of view, I completely agree with this agreement. This essay will the debate and give details for why I completely agree. Firstly, traditions have always acted as a part of the countries’ identities. These identities are what make people different, which means more diversity in thinking, and by this more innovative to be created. In addition, people all around the world have always been proud of their own backgrounds, and this has lead to more competition between countries in many fields such as science, art and technology. Secondly, all customs have always been depending on moral aspects. Helping people, enjoying time with family and friends, respecting elderly people and being with neighbors are often activities practiced in these traditional events and habits. So, this will clearly be helpful to generate more disciplined society. Finally, some believe that being strict to the habits of our ancestors could lead people to be more nationalist and racist. However, these merits of personality are more obvious nowadays when people less connected to customs, so, there is no relation between then and traditions. To summarize, the customs are viral that they protect the country’s identity as well as the moral aspects of the community. This essay discussed why I strongly agree with the need of protecting the traditions and customs.

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 fields such as science, art and technology.

Secondly
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been depending
 on moral aspects. Helping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, enjoying time with family and friends, respecting elderly You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and being with neighbors are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
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some
 believe that being strict to the habits of our ancestors could lead You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to be more nationalist and racist. However
, these merits of personality are more obvious nowadays when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 less connected to customs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, there is no relation between then and traditions.

To summarize
, the customs are viral that they protect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
 identity as well
 as the moral aspects of the community. This essay discussed why I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the need of protecting the traditions and customs. 