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what is my favourite sport? please descirbe it, explain why do you like it ?

what is my favourite sport? please descirbe it, explain why do you like it? Lr3M3

My favourite sport is slacklining. It makes me so excited because it’s a risky activity. I‘ve started since I was 15. At first, I thought I could do it because my parents said that it’s so dangerous but I decided to do it. I registered in a sports club and toke up the challenge. I jumped at the chance to walk on a rope and now when I do this sport, I acquire a taste for it. I have a whale of a time when I am on a narrow fabric and I just think I can achieve my ambitious

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favourite
 sport is Possible spelling mistake found.slack lining
slacklining
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makes
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so
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because
 it’s a risky activity. I‘ve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 since I was 15. At first
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 I could do it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my parents said that it’s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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dangerous
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but
 I decided to do it. I registered in a sports club and toke up the challenge. I jumped at the chance to walk on a rope and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 when I do this sport, I acquire a taste for it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have a whale of a time when I am on a narrow fabric and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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think
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