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what is my favorite sport?

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Sport is a very good way of training our body and free the mind in addition to, in competition sports we have fun with our friends. There are plenty of sports that I like to play but one of them that I want to play with my friends is football. There are several reasons why I choose that, if I want to say one of my reasons, it is a team sport and we should help each other to winning game and doesn't let anybody feel left out. Everyone has a special role in the team, which includes Goalkeeper, Defenders, Midfielders, and Forwards. Mostly I play football with my friends one or two days a week. In our game It is not big deal if we win or lose, it's important to compete and have fun.
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Everyone has a special role in the team, which includes Goalkeeper, Defenders, Midfielders, and Forwards.

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IELTS essay what is my favorite sport?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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