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What is life? What does life mean to you? Have you had an experience that made you think about the meaning of life?

What is life? What does life mean to you? Have you had an experience that made you think about the meaning of life? do02K
Life is a period of time that is given measurably to all living things. More detailed examples will be shown in the next paragraphs. First, the life that I am existing at the moment is another chance to improve my own and correct mistakes of mine. Second, during my life, I have got experiences that made me think about the meaning of life, my each day was passing ordinary, similar to each other, a bit boring ____ at that minute something came to my mind and shoved it. The concept was 'what exactly am I supposed to do here? , and why am I in this place? '. This was the starting part of thinking of me about the meaning of life. After all, I found out that I had come to this world to make myself sensible and a true human being by not repeating errors of past. God is giving me 24 hours a day for learning how to control haughtiness and sort opinions of mine to fix them. Ultimate, I like watching and listening to amusing, challenging, eccentric, adventurous films and songs to gladden myself in free times. Besides, I prefer to own a pet like a puppy for having a good time. Also, you will permanently have a nice homie in companionship and their loyalty is really praiseworthy. To conclude, life is a astounding journey that keeps intriguing secrets in itself.
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Life
is a period of time
that is
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given
measurably
to all living things. More detailed examples will
be shown
in the
next
paragraphs.

First
, the
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life
that I am existing at the moment is another chance to
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improve
my
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own
and correct mistakes of mine. Second, during my
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life
, I have
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got
experiences that made me
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think
about the meaning of
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life
, my each day was passing ordinary, similar to each other, a bit boring ____ at that minute something came to my mind and shoved it. The concept was 'what exactly am I supposed to do here?
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,
and why am I in this place? '. This was the starting part of thinking of me about the meaning of
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life
.
After all
, I found out that I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to this world to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
myself sensible and a true human being by not repeating errors of past. God is giving me 24 hours a day for learning how to control haughtiness and sort opinions of mine to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
them. Ultimate, I like watching and listening to amusing, challenging, eccentric, adventurous films and songs to gladden myself in free times.
Besides
, I prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
a pet like a puppy for having a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
time.
Also
, you will
permanently
have a nice
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homie
in companionship and their loyalty is
really
praiseworthy.

To conclude
,
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life
is
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a
astounding journey that
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keeps
intriguing secrets in itself.
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IELTS essay What is life? What does life mean to you? Have you had an experience that made you think about the meaning of life?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
235 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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