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What is climate change what are the reasons

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Irrefutably, climate change is ubiquitous thing in these days and it affects on the whole world. The changes of weather in environment has dramatically affected on the living things, it illustrates adversely impacts on the natural resources. The citizens are the responsible of these changes and how individuals control it? I elaborate these perspectives in upcoming paragraphs. The staple quandary of climate changes only the changes of global temperature. In contemporary era, the sudden changes of weather like the winter season, summer season comes out without any time or seasons have great impact on natural living or non_ living things. In some cases, the surging temperature in summer time called climate change. The indigenous masses are the responsible for the changes of climate nowdays just owing of deforestation. In 21st century, the escalating human beings are desiring to spend the money on luxurious things. Overall, climate change are controlled by citizens with afforestation
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is ubiquitous thing in these days and it affects
on the whole
world. The
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changes
of weather in environment has
dramatically
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affected
on the living things, it illustrates
adversely
impacts on the natural resources. The citizens are the
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responsible of
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and how individuals control it? I elaborate these perspectives in upcoming paragraphs. The staple quandary of
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climate
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changes
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only
the
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of global temperature. In contemporary era, the sudden
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changes
of weather like
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the winter season
, summer season
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comes
out without any time or seasons have great impact on natural living or non_ living things. In
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some
cases, the surging temperature in
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summer time
called
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climate
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change
. The indigenous masses are the responsible for the
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changes
of
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climate
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nowdays
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owing of deforestation. In 21st century, the escalating human beings are desiring to spend the money on luxurious things.
Overall
,
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climate
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are controlled
by citizens with afforestation
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IELTS essay What is climate change what are the reasons

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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