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Global warming is one of the most serious issue in nowadays . What are the causes and how it is tackle

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It has been universally acknowledge that problem of global warming is escalating at an alarming rate in current scenario. This essay will elaborate the main reason for this is deforestation and propose possible solution is reforestation to overcome this predicament, which will be explained in the forthcoming paragraphs. Commencing with the causes, which are responsible for the growth of global warming. One of the main delemma is that, nowadays, many nations face overpopulation, then, they start deforestation for build the houses and for agriculture land. The second contributing factor is, almost everyone use plastic bottles in their daily life and after using they burn that material because it is biodegradable. Additionally, car emitt harmful gases but that vehicle is extremely popular in human beings. As a result, the air temprature is increasing
It has been
universally
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acknowledge
that problem of global warming is escalating at an alarming rate in
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current
scenario. This essay will elaborate the main reason for this is deforestation and propose possible solution is reforestation to overcome this predicament, which will be
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explained
in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Commencing with the causes, which are responsible for the growth of global warming. One of the main
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delemma
is that, nowadays,
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many
nations face overpopulation, then, they
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start
deforestation for build the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
and for agriculture land. The second contributing factor is, almost everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "uses", "used".
use
plastic bottles in their daily life and after using they burn that material
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because
it is biodegradable.
Additionally
,
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car emitt
harmful gases
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but
that vehicle is
extremely
popular in human beings.
As a result
, the air
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temprature
is
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increasing
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issue in nowadays. What are the causes and how it is tackle

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