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What is beauty? the definition of beauty

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Beauty is a noun in order to evaluate something’s appearance. I divide it into two types. Type one is to evaluate someone’s appearance and another is to describe the scene or something. Furthermore, Beauty also is used to describe a person who has a responsibility of working and has a passion to make something or someone better. Moreover, the action which helps someone better is evaluated as a beautiful action. Summarily, I mention that beauty does not describe appearance. It includes a good action, a person who has a beauty passion, . . . . . .
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IELTS essay What is beauty? the definition of beauty

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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