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Describe a time when you saw interesting on social media

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Social media is part of our life. I am social person. In my leisure time, i spend time on social sites such as Instagram, WhatsApp, Twitter, Facebook, Pinterest etcetra. Today i would like to talk about a interesting video watched on Instagram. During the corona pandemic year, I was full of free. I scrolling on Instagram. Because I was alone at home. It was interesting video. As for as health related video. According to the presentator Dr. William verma. Mostly I ate junk food. Therefore, I was fatty those days like cough potato. When I saw health care movie. It was eye-opener for me. There are ample of reason why it was interesting. Firstly, I never uses salad. When I watched film, i know about health problems and solutions. It was extremely beneficial for me. Secondly, I go to walk daily nowadays. Apart from that, i eat only home made food avoid fast food. That is why, I saw interesting movie on social sites. To be honest, It was amazing film and I never watch these type of movie before on social media.
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media is part of our life. I am
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person. In my leisure time,
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i
spend time on
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social
sites such as Instagram, WhatsApp, Twitter, Facebook, Pinterest
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etcetra
.
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Today
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would like to talk about
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interesting
video
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watched
on Instagram. During the corona pandemic year, I was full of free.
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I was alone at home. It was
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interesting
video. As for as health related video. According to the
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presentator
Dr. William
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verma
.
Mostly
I ate junk food.
Therefore
, I was fatty those days like cough potato.
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saw
health care movie. It was eye-opener for me. There are ample of reason why it was
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interesting
.
Firstly
, I never
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uses
salad. When I
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watched
film,
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i
know about health problems and solutions. It was
extremely
beneficial for me.
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, I go to walk daily nowadays. Apart from that,
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i
eat
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home made food avoid
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food.
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why, I
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saw
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movie on
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sites. To be honest, It was amazing film and I never
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these type of movie
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you saw interesting on social media

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
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