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What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion?

What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion? gYmel
In VietNam, the fashion is various. There is no particular pattern for every one. The choice of clothes depends on circumstances. For example, If you go to work or to take part in a formal celebration, you will wear fomal clothes like a suit; vest. . . ; Otherwise, If you take a party with your friend or go to travel, you usually wear normal clothes like polo shirt, T-shirt, blouse. . . and in some special days, the women often choose traditional Vietnamese dresses like Ao dai. Recently, the young people tend to wear clothes which are designed for young style come from the foreign countries thank to international integration the such as the US; the UK; Korea; . . . . Summarily, the fashion in VietNam is various and flexible. Inspite of international integration but we always keep and maintain the traditional clothes.
In
VietNam
, the fashion is various. There is no particular pattern for every one. The choice of
clothes
depends

on circumstances.
For example
, If you go to work or to
take part
in a formal celebration, you will wear
fomal
clothes
like a suit; vest.
.
.
;
Otherwise
, If you take a party with your friend or go to travel, you
usually
wear normal
clothes
like polo shirt, T-shirt, blouse.
.
.
and
in
some
special days, the women
often
choose traditional Vietnamese dresses like
Ao
dai
. Recently, the young
people
tend to wear
clothes
which
are designed
for young style
come
from the foreign countries thank to international integration the such as the US; the UK; Korea;
.
.
.
.
Summarily
, the fashion in
VietNam
is various and flexible.
Inspite
of international integration
but
we always
keep
and maintain the traditional
clothes
.
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IELTS essay What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion?

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