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What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion?

What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion? gYmel
In VietNam, the fashion is various. There is no particular pattern for every one. The choice of clothes depends on circumstances. For example, If you go to work or to take part in a formal celebration, you will wear fomal clothes like a suit; vest. . . ; Otherwise, If you take a party with your friend or go to travel, you usually wear normal clothes like polo shirt, T-shirt, blouse. . . and in some special days, the women often choose traditional Vietnamese dresses like Ao dai. Recently, the young people tend to wear clothes which are designed for young style come from the foreign countries thank to international integration the such as the US; the UK; Korea; . . . . Summarily, the fashion in VietNam is various and flexible. Inspite of international integration but we always keep and maintain the traditional clothes.
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for young style
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come
from the foreign countries thank to international integration the such as the US; the UK; Korea;
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, the fashion in
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is various and flexible.
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of international integration
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IELTS essay What can you say about Vietnamese taste in fashion?

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