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Do you prefer going out or staying at home? Why? I am the person who is interested in spending my spare time with my family and friends. This method helps me to become less depressed and have happier lifestyle and mood.

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you prefer going out or staying at home? Why?

I am the person who
is interested
in spending my spare time with my family and friends. This method
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helps
me to become less depressed and have happier lifestyle and mood.
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you prefer going out or staying at home? Why?

I am the person who
is interested
in spending my spare time with my family and friends. This method
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me to become less depressed and have happier lifestyle and mood.
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IELTS essay Do you prefer going out or staying at home? Why? I am the person who is interested in spending my spare time with my family and friends. This method helps me to become less depressed and have happier lifestyle and mood.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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