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What I have learn about a country by watching a film.

What I have learn about a country by watching a film. 1bbDW

I have watched a movie when I Was ten years old. This movie has been maid in America. I have learnt various things about American people and the culture. This film gave me information about some interesting customs. American people are super kind and they take care of their family really well. They like to hang out with their family more that friends. I also learned something about their costom, one of the important American costom is that they eat food together. In conclusion, They are very attentive about their family health and happiness.

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