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What I have learn about a country by watching a film.

What I have learn about a country by watching a film. 1bbDW
I have watched a movie when I Was ten years old. This movie has been maid in America. I have learnt various things about American people and the culture. This film gave me information about some interesting customs. American people are super kind and they take care of their family really well. They like to hang out with their family more that friends. I also learned something about their costom, one of the important American costom is that they eat food together. In conclusion, They are very attentive about their family health and happiness.
I have
watched
a movie when I Was ten years
old
. This movie has been maid in America. I have
learnt
various things about American
people
and the culture. This film gave me information about
some
interesting customs. American
people
are super
kind and
they take care of their family
really
well. They like to hang out with their family more that friends. I
also
learned something about their
costom
, one of the
important
American
costom
is that they eat food together.
In conclusion
, They are
very
attentive about their family health and happiness.
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IELTS essay What I have learn about a country by watching a film.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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