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What household chores are suitable for young people like you?

What household chores are suitable for young people like you? n1VKR
Well, young people now so basically they can be able to handle any housework. From dishwashing, cleaning the floor, laundering I believe that finishing those tasks is just a piece of cake. But generally, we should do the chores that are suitable to our physical health or perhaps to our own interests. For example, as a small girl, I prefer doing light chores such as doing the washing-up to heavy ones like mowing the lawn.
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IELTS essay What household chores are suitable for young people like you?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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