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What features do you think future houses will have?

What features do you think future houses will have? bxLa6
I suppose that the future houses will be so modern with high-tech furniture and facilities. Given that we will face energy shortages in the future, future homes will have various technologies like “Smart thermostats” and “Smart lighting”. With these technologies, every house will be as warm as it needs to be, and also has as light as it needs to have, in other words, these technologies will be nature-friendly. Besides, most of the house chores will be done by smart robots made with artificial intelligence. Moreover, in near future, if you want to go on a long holiday, you would put your mind at ease with the kind of security system that allows for remote monitoring and control of locks, cameras, and alarms. In my opinion, the future houses and apartments not only can be energy-friendly but also they will be able to produce their required energy.
I suppose that the
future
houses
will be
so
modern with high-tech furniture and facilities.

Given
that we will face energy shortages in the
future
,
future
homes will have various technologies like “Smart thermostats” and “Smart lighting”. With these technologies, every
house
will be as warm as it needs to be, and
also
has as light as it needs to have,
in other words
, these technologies will be nature-friendly.

Besides
, most of the
house
chores will
be done
by smart robots made with artificial intelligence.

Moreover
, in near
future
, if you want to go on a long holiday, you would put your mind at
ease
with the kind of security system that
allows
for remote monitoring and control of locks, cameras, and alarms.

In my opinion, the
future
houses
and apartments not
only
can be energy-friendly
but
also
they will be able to produce their required energy.
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IELTS essay What features do you think future houses will have?

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