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in today's world many people use mobile phones and the internet to communicate with others.

in today's world many people use mobile phones and the internet to communicate with others. JwJBD
Nowadays, most people communicate through mobile phones and the Internet. This has caused the creation of new words and expressions and different spellings and grammar, but what are these changes, and are they good or bad? This essay will give some examples of these changes and explain why they are good or bad. In the past, people used to write letters to talk to each other or used to communicate more face to face, but it was hard for them to keep in touch with friends and family who lived far from them, sometimes it took so long for a letter to its destination, also traveling long distances to meet those who lived far away during different weather conditions wasn't always possible. But modern lifestyle and technology changed all of this, now you can simply text anyone from anywhere and they'll receive your message within seconds, it's much faster and easier to communicate with people, but this new way of communication had also influenced our way of talking and writing, there are so many new words and abbreviations that people created on their own. for example, LOL means "laugh out loud" which is quite popular and most people know its meaning, but more importantly, people care less about the grammar and correct spelling of the words. Yet language change isn't always a bad thing as long as we know how to use the correct forms of sentences and grammar when we need to. Overall, I don't think we can stop this change and we can not prevent the new ways of communication, all we can do is to make sure we appreciate and know how to use the correct vocabulary and grammar.
Nowadays, most
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communicate through mobile phones and the Internet. This has caused the creation of
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new
words and expressions and
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different
spellings and
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grammar
,
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but
what are these
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changes
, and are they
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good
or
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bad
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some
examples of these
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changes
and
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explain
why they are
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good
or
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bad
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In the past,
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people
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used
to write letters to talk to each other or
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used
to communicate more face to face,
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but
it was
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hard
for them to
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keep
in touch with friends and family who
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lived
far from them,
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sometimes
it took
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so
long for a letter to its destination,
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traveling long distances to
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meet
those who
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lived
far away during
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different
weather conditions wasn't always possible.

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modern lifestyle and technology
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changed
all of this,
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now
you can
simply
text anyone from
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anywhere and
they'll receive your message within seconds, it's much faster and easier to communicate with
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people
,
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but
this
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new
way of communication had
also
influenced our way of talking and writing, there are
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so
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many
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new
words and abbreviations that
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people
created on their
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own
.
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for
example, LOL means
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laugh out loud
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which is quite popular and most
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people
know its meaning,
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but
more
importantly
,
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people
care less about the
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grammar
and correct spelling of the words.

Yet
language
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change
isn't always a
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bad
thing as long as we know how to
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use
the correct forms of sentences and
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grammar
when we need to.

Overall
, I don't
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think
we can
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this
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change and
we can not
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prevent
the
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new
ways of communication, all we can do is to
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make
sure we appreciate and know how to
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use
the correct vocabulary and
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grammar
.
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IELTS essay in today's world many people use mobile phones and the internet to communicate with others.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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