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What factors make a good friend

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Friendship plays an important role in everybody’s life because it makes our lives happier. A good friend can be a person who is always beside us to help us overcome challenges or be willing to share enjoyable moments in life Friendship is a connection to mutual affection between people. It isn’t simple to meet, study or work together then become best friends. To have a person who understands or sympathizes with us is extremely lucky. So what factors make a good friend? First of all, I think respect is the most important thing in any relationship. we sometimes have different thoughts, opinions but we shouldn’t have big arguments which cause breaking up a friendship, please calm down and be in your friend's shoes to understand why they did that. when your friend respects and trust you, it means that you are a special person with whom they can share and be open up to when they have problems in their lives The second thing that I would like to mention is sincerity. I believe that sincerity maintains your friendship longer. A sincere friend will find a way to tell you something that may be difficult for you to hear but be willing to listen to you complain and support you and offer advice as needed. In friendship, some moments lead to an argument or mistakes times. This can hurt another person which results at the end of a friendship. But we have to learn how to forgive, share. Nobody doesn’t have mistakes, if you always remind your friend’s mistake time after time, that will make your friendship in trouble. Of course, we have to forgive right time. Please forgive each other the first mistakes and tell them to know what wrong is so that then they don’t get this mistake again and make it true. The finally, this is compatible with each other’s concept of life. That can help people more understand. The companion can be the same hobby, belief, purpose life,  then those common things will also help each other have many similarities so that we can talk and understand each other better Except for the qualities I mentioned, there are a lot of qualities to making a good friend like loyal, sharing, love, these simple things will make a wonderful friendship. Everybody should find a good friend. before, you should be a good friend. -
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IELTS essay What factors make a good friend

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
396 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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