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What electronic devices interest you? Why?

What electronic devices interest you? Why? 53GWP

My favorite electronic device is air conditioning. It is a system for controlling the humidity, ventilation, and temperature in a building or vehicle. Air conditioners circulate and filter air, removing pollutants and mold from the air. This is especially important for people who suffer from allergies and asthma because it minimizes the irritants that trigger an attack. Additionally, when offices are air conditioned, people are able to work better and make better decisions.

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