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main features of cement production

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The given diagramtic representation is for the process of producing cement through using limestone and clay, and concrete through cement, water and sand. In cement production, the materials Limestone and Clay are main ingredients. These two materials are crushed through crusher to produce powder out of it. Further the powder should now go through the rotating heater, in this part of the process the powder will be heated at certain temperature while rotating heater circles itself. Then the powder will be grinded and as a final result from the grinder cement will be produced and packed
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representation is for the process of producing
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cement
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through
using limestone and clay, and concrete
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through
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cement
, water and sand.

In
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cement
production, the materials Limestone and Clay are main ingredients. These two materials
are crushed
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through
crusher to produce
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powder
out of it.
Further
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powder
should
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now
go
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through
the rotating heater, in this part of the process the
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powder
will
be heated
at certain temperature while rotating heater circles itself. Then the
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powder
will be
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grinded
and as a final result from the grinder
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cement
will
be produced
and
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packed
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IELTS essay main features of cement production

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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