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impacts of globalisation and whether it has benefited the world by bringing people, nations and nations together

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In this task, I will review the impacts of globalisation as well as whether it has benefited the world by bringing people, nations and nations together. Globalisation has been happening for decades with or without our knowledge. Ever since mankind discovered how to travel by sea, and as technology has been more sophisticated, globalisation has only been made easier. One common example would be multinational companies, this not only allow for employees to have the chance to work in various locations, but allow them to explore different cultures as well. Indirectly, multinational companies promote countries to exchange technology advancements as well as support the export of goods. Another example of a globalisation event would be the Olympics. Countries all around the world, regardless of friends or foes, compete against one another in a friendly and yet competitive environment. This would increase the respect that one nation gives to the other and bond nations together through workmanship. As competitions are held every 4 years and are always in different countries each time, this gives the opportunity for countries to display it’s unique culture and promote tourism to millions of viewers worldwide. Countries such as North Korea, who are known to be incredibly secretive and closed off, have also participated and hosted the Olympic games. Needless to say, people who criticize globalisation are not only stubborn but also incredibly naive, as the sheer impact of globalisation outweighs any and all negative factors. There is no reason as to why unity among humanity should not be achieved and quite frankly, long overdue.
In this task, I will review the impacts of
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globalisation
as well
as whether it has benefited the world by bringing
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people
,
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nations
and
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nations
together.

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Globalisation
has been happening for decades with or without our knowledge. Ever since mankind discovered how to travel by sea, and as technology has been more sophisticated,
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globalisation
has
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only
been made
easier. One common example would be multinational
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companies
, this not
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only
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allow
for employees to have the chance to work in various locations,
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but
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allow
them to explore
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different
cultures
as well
.
Indirectly
, multinational
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companies
promote
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countries
to exchange technology advancements
as well
as support the export of
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goods
.

Another example of a
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globalisation
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event
would be the Olympics.
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Countries
all around the world, regardless of friends or foes, compete against one another in a friendly and
yet
competitive environment. This would increase the respect that one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
gives to the other and bond
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nations
together through workmanship. As competitions
are held
every 4 years and are always in
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different
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countries
each time, this gives the opportunity for
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countries
to display
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it’s unique culture
and promote tourism to millions of viewers worldwide.
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Countries
such as North Korea, who
are known
to be
incredibly
secretive and closed off, have
also
participated and hosted the
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Olympic games
.

Needless to say,
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people
who criticize
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globalisation
are not
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only
stubborn
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but
also
incredibly
naive, as the sheer impact of
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globalisation
outweighs any and all
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negative
factors. There is no reason as to why unity among humanity should not
be achieved
and quite
frankly
, long overdue.
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IELTS essay impacts of globalisation and whether it has benefited the world by bringing people, nations and nations together

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259 words
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