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What do you usually do in the weekend ?

What do you usually do in the weekend? YyL5m
I would talk about 2 period of time which are before covid pandemic and the later one. At the weekend, it is time for us to unwind, cherish the valueable time with your family, your friends or particularly your lover, so you can do everything you are keen to do like hanging out, watching Netflix at home for hours or merely cooking a scumptious meal for your family. As far as my hobby, i frequently go to coffee shop with my friends to chat, take some glamorous pics to post on fb, ins. . Undountedly, everything will be played out in the most comfortable direction. After having covid pandemic, as we know, we do not allowed to go outside to deter minimize the amount of covid case as well as obey the regulations to insulate the health of your family as well as yourself. So at the weekend, i still be at home and to take advantage of this time in the most useful way, i strived to study english, furthermore, i learned grade 12 curriculum as soon as possible to fortify my knowledge better before initiating the course. No matter that i am not allowed to go out as the time before having pandemic but i never get mad at it, i know that everyone exert to combat with the pandemic. As an individual, i cant do anything more except to executive the regulations of authorities seriously. Eventually i wish that all of us will have enough strengthen and courage to bypass this pandemic, after that settle down and turn our normal lives back around. Thanks for reading, stay healthy, readers
I would talk about 2 period of
time
which are
before
covid
pandemic and the later one. At the weekend, it is
time
for us to unwind, cherish the
valueable
time
with your family, your friends or
particularly
your lover,
so
you can do everything you are keen to do like hanging out, watching Netflix at home for hours or
merely
cooking a
scumptious
meal for your family. As far as my hobby,
i
frequently
go to coffee shop with my friends to chat, take
some
glamorous pics to post on
fb
, ins.
.
Undountedly
, everything will
be played
out in the most comfortable direction. After having
covid
pandemic, as we know, we do not
allowed
to go outside to deter minimize the amount of
covid
case
as well
as obey the regulations to insulate the health of your family
as well
as yourself.
So
at the weekend,
i
still
be
at home and to take advantage of this
time
in the most useful way,
i
strived to study
english
,
furthermore
,
i
learned grade 12 curriculum as
soon
as possible to fortify my knowledge better
before
initiating the course. No matter that
i
am not
allowed
to go out as the
time
before
having pandemic
but
i
never
get
mad at it,
i
know that everyone exert to combat with the pandemic. As an individual,
i
cant do anything more except to executive the regulations of authorities
seriously
.
Eventually
i
wish that all of us will have
enough
strengthen and courage to bypass this pandemic, after that settle down and turn our normal
lives
back around.

Thanks for reading, stay healthy, readers
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IELTS essay What do you usually do in the weekend?

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271 words
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