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Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Some people think social media is a good way to express personal views. However, others do not think so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

: Some people think social media is a good way to express personal views. However, others do not think so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. j9R3X
Technology progress rapidly in our society, there are many kinds of apps that can post our mind on the net. Posting our daily life on Instagram and facebook are already be simple things. Therefore, I agree that social media is a good way to express personal views. Firstly, posting life on website can share about useful information to friends. When you travel abroad, you want to find beautiful scenes or special viewpoints. You can surf the net that some people share on their blogs. Those passages shares about their experience when they visit the place. For example, My brother went to England last year. He prepared a lot of information about England. He surfs the social media to find out that most people go to England must visit views. There is a special point called Stone Hege. Afterwards, he went to it and posted on his social media to share his feeling. It’s a spectacular viewpoint he said. Thus, social media is useful when we travel around the world. Secondly, using social media that releasing our stress, writing context on the net to share our life. In our society, many people afford heavy work. Writing message on our social passage to express personal views, it is a good method to release our stress. For instance, my friend work at supermarket, he feels tired after work but he likes to share some interesting things on his personal media and discusses with me. When he sharing these funny images that makes him happy. So, social media it’s an important thing to some stressful people. Admittedly, some people think social media is a bad way to express personal views that may affect teenagers to terrible behavior. However, I prefer that social media brings lots of benefits to people. Sharing useful information and releasing our stress on social media on net, those are good influence between social media and our life.
Technology progress
rapidly
in our society, there are
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kinds of apps that can post our mind on the net. Posting our daily
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life
on Instagram and
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facebook
are already be simple things.
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, I
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is a
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good
way to express
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personal
views.

Firstly
, posting
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on website can
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share
about useful information to friends. When you travel abroad, you want to find
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beautiful
scenes or special viewpoints. You can surf the net that
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some
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people
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share
on their blogs. Those passages
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shares
about their experience when they visit the place.
For example
, My brother went to England last year. He prepared
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a lot of
information about England. He surfs the
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social
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media
to find out that most
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people
go to England
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must
visit views. There is a special point called Stone
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Hege
. Afterwards, he went to it and posted on his
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to
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share
his feeling. It’s a spectacular viewpoint he said.
Thus
,
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social
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media
is useful when we travel around the world.

Secondly
, using
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that releasing our
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stress
, writing context on the net to
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share
our
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life
. In our society,
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many
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people
afford heavy work. Writing message on our
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passage to express
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personal
views, it is a
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good
method to release our
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stress
.
For instance
, my friend work at supermarket, he feels tired after work
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but
he likes to
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share
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some
interesting things on his
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personal
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and discusses with me.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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he sharing
these
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funny
images that
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makes
him happy.
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,
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social
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it’s an
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important
thing to
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stressful
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Admittedly
,
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think
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is a
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bad
way to express
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personal
views that may affect
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teenagers
to terrible behavior.
However
, I prefer that
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social
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media
brings lots of benefits to
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people
. Sharing useful information and releasing our
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stress
on
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social
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media
on net, those are
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good
influence between
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and our
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.
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IELTS essay : Some people think social media is a good way to express personal views. However, others do not think so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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