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International relation and partnership

International relation and partnership 1V5dM
The Faculty of Psychology, Universitas Airlangga is currently exploring the possibility of academic cooperative relationships with overseas schollars as an Adjunct Professors in our Faculty. This is done in order to increase international cooperation as well as improve the quality of knowledge in our Faculty. As I said at the end of last week, I was assigned by the Vice Dean for Research, Publication, & Cooperation, Dr. Endang Surjaningrum to contact you about this offer. Activities offered as Adjunct Professors at our Faculty include Teach some credits of particular courses in classes / seminars / trainings, give a writing clinic for postgraduate students/lecturers, conduct a joint supervisor, and publish as agreed by faculty (Unair affiliated or joint publication with Unair scholars). These various activities are still our offer, you can engage with the activities that you agree to among these offers. Regarding the timing of implementation, I have conveyed to the deputy dean that you are currently involved in a research project in Australia regarding the mental health of indigenous people. For that we leave it to you, if you accept our offer, when is the right time to carry out this cooperation. If you are willing, later my colleague from the international cooperation department will contact you further regarding the details of the cooperation. That's what I can say as an opening, Prof. Hans. Thank you very much for your attention and willingness.
The Faculty of Psychology,
Universitas
Airlangga
is
currently
exploring the possibility of academic cooperative relationships with overseas
schollars
as an Adjunct
Professors
in our Faculty. This
is done
in order to increase international
cooperation
as well
as
improve
the quality of knowledge in our Faculty. As I said at the
end
of last week, I
was assigned
by the Vice Dean for Research, Publication, &
Cooperation
, Dr.
Endang
Surjaningrum
to contact you about this offer.

Activities offered as Adjunct Professors at our Faculty include Teach
some
credits of particular courses in classes / seminars / trainings, give a writing clinic for postgraduate students/lecturers, conduct a joint supervisor, and publish as
agreed
by faculty (
Unair
affiliated or joint publication with
Unair
scholars). These various activities are
still
our offer, you can engage with the activities that you
agree
to among these offers.

Regarding the timing of implementation, I have conveyed to the deputy dean that you are
currently
involved in a research project in Australia regarding the mental health of indigenous
people
. For that we
leave
it to you, if you accept our offer, when is the right time to carry out this cooperation.

If you are willing, later my colleague from the international
cooperation
department will contact you
further
regarding the
details
of the
cooperation
. That's what I can say as an opening, Prof. Hans. Thank you
very
much for your attention and willingness.
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IELTS essay International relation and partnership

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
234 words
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