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What do you think you can contribute to AIESEC?*

What do you think you can contribute to AIESEC? * KVyp6
There are three main things that I can contribute to AIESEC. First, my family has been having a sustainable business model for more than 30 years and as a little girl, I am given chances to interact and communicate with customers. Therefore, I have the ability to work for the operation section with conscientiousness and I will not make your heart sink. Second, I have experience in being a monitor for four years and build trust in a lot of friends, teachers by virtue of my responsibility and co-operation. Nevertheless, I have a desire to make effort in a bigger organization like AIESEC as new blood at full strength. Last but not least, I used to participate in an English club in my high school with the role of a character in a play so that I have teamwork and acting skill to help everyone blow off steam after stressful hours. I assure you that I have the zeal to give 100% towards my work & bring a noteworthy contribution to the AIESEC organization.
There are three main things that I can contribute to AIESEC.
First
, my family has been having a sustainable business model for more than 30 years and as a
little
girl, I am
given
chances to interact and communicate with customers.
Therefore
, I have the ability to work for the operation section with conscientiousness and I will not
make
your heart sink. Second, I have experience in being a monitor for four years and build trust in
a lot of
friends, teachers by virtue of my responsibility and co-operation.
Nevertheless
, I have a desire to
make
effort in a bigger organization like AIESEC as new blood at full strength. Last
but
not least, I
used
to participate in an English club in my high school with the role of a character in a play
so
that I have teamwork and acting
skill
to
help
everyone blow off steam after stressful hours. I assure you that I have the zeal to give 100% towards my work & bring a noteworthy contribution to the AIESEC organization.
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IELTS essay What do you think you can contribute to AIESEC? *

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1 paragraphs
174 words
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