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effects of interactive television

effects of interactive television N3GAj
According to the reading, Interactive television is defined as a range of systems that allow viewers to engage with television material while watching it. As mentioned in the reading, Interactive television has detrimental impacts on children, such as lowering their intelligence level and allowing marketers to target them for non-educational objectives. In the lecture, the professor explains the drawbacks of interactive television by giving some examples. To begin with, the professor illustrates how interactive television might negatively affect a child's intelligence. Based on a recent study, he shows that children who are habituated to television at an early age score lower on IQ tests than others. In addition, a pediatrics institution stated that toddlers under the age of two should not watch TV because it may disrupt their cognitive development. Another example that the professor mentions is interactive television allows advertisers to reach kids in bad ways. What he means is that certain interactive online games have already been created to promote things such as cereal, chocolate chip, cookies and beverages to children while playing the games. Furthermore, offspring are intrinsically vulnerable to advertising because they usually believe what they see or hear as fact. Therefore, commercials delivered through interactive games that children can play could have a great impact on them.
According to the reading,
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Interactive
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television
is defined
as a range of systems that
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allow
viewers to engage with
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television
material while watching it.

As mentioned in the reading,
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Interactive
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television
has detrimental impacts on
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children
, such as lowering their intelligence level and allowing marketers to target them for non-educational objectives.

In the lecture, the professor
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explains
the drawbacks of
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interactive
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television
by giving
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some
examples.

To
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begin
with, the professor illustrates how
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interactive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
might
negatively
affect a child's intelligence. Based on a recent study, he
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shows
that
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children
who
are habituated
to
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television
at an early age score lower on IQ
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tests
than others.

In addition
, a pediatrics institution stated that toddlers under the age of two should not
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watch
TV
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because
it may disrupt their cognitive development.

Another example that the professor mentions is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interactive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
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allows
advertisers to reach kids in
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bad
ways.

What he means is that certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interactive
online games have already
been created
to promote things such as cereal, chocolate chip, cookies and beverages to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
while playing the games.
Furthermore
, offspring are
intrinsically
vulnerable to advertising
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
usually
believe what they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
or hear as fact.
Therefore
, commercials delivered through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interactive
games that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
can play could have a great impact on them.
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IELTS essay effects of interactive television

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
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