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what do you think it is usefuf or not to use the internet

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Nowadays, our life to depend on with Internet. Most people use it for a veriety of purposes, such as getting things done quickly, professional reaseons and some for worth. What do youthink is good or bad about using the Internet. At the moments it is impossible solve the problems without Internet. Am I right? Yes it is true. A lot of part of population get out of a difficult situation with it. How wonderful that is. Then peoples time also saved. What we have mentioned aboveareit is benefits. On the other hand, it does more harm than good to society. This is wrong way of using Internet. At the same time people hiding on the Internet are poisoning the minds of many people. Oh how disgusting this is. In my opinion use of the Internet is both a benefit and disadvantage. So you use Internet only for good purpose not bad. That should be good for you and us
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IELTS essay what do you think it is usefuf or not to use the internet

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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