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How do people follow the laws/rules in your country?

How do people follow the laws/rules in your country? QVeAP
In Vietnam, I am not sure that all the people knew about all the laws and the rules, because some laws do not affect their life. For example, the laws of business do not impact on the farmers, but I believe that they knew about some basic laws which help them can perceive what actions are in-laws. The government as an instructor has an assignment that to make the laws common for all people. Some methods they can do such as propaganda or putting on the news on television, radio, . . . Now, through the development of technology and digital services, the assignment can be solved more easily so the citizen can approach the laws whenever and wherever they need. Otherwise, there are a few other ways to help people follow the rules like applying the laws in education, or taking out the punishments. If the people break the law on purpose, they will be punished. Overall, there are many ways to help people follow the laws. In my opinion, Propaganda and Education are the most effective ways.
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them can perceive what actions are in-laws. The
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whenever and wherever they need.
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help
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follow the
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like applying the
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in education, or taking out the punishments. If the
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break the
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on purpose, they will
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IELTS essay How do people follow the laws/rules in your country?

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