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what do you think is better love vs money?

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Love and money is a debatable thing. Choosing one over another includes quite a risk along with, the consequences which often occur as a surprise in one’s life. But both of them must possess a pro and a con, let’s go-ahead to find out. THE TWO FACES The one aspect of life is money. Imagining a day without capital is just absurd, we’ve been witnessing the poverty in our world since day one. No one is unaware of the fact that, to exist in this world, money is the fundamental must-have thing and even the requirement to survive. We are well acquainted, that money is an asset in one’s life. The world’s materialistic happiness is only achieved by capital. The desires, the kinds of stuff, the happiness, all this is fulfilled with the money itself. Yet another aspect of human life is the word love. Some comprehend and blend it with money and leads a good life whereas some, take it for granted and chases only the capital. In today’s scenario, people have butchered the quote to “money CAN buy happiness”. Really? Yes, it can buy SOME happiness, but not your entire life’s happiness. Only love can make you feel wanted and important in this world. Spending time with your loved ones is what makes you satisfied and amiable and gives you a reason to be alive. THE LESSER-KNOWN FACE Since we’ve discussed the assets, it’s now time for some dark truth and the liability. It takes seconds, to change money, from asset to liability, and this happens with a word, greed. Drooling over money can sometimes result in hazardous consequences. You never know what may happen, you may lose your loved ones or even your life. Working hard for money is the only way to lead a good life. Smart and hard work is the only way to surpass. Sometimes, love can destroy you too. Overloving and overtrusting is a stepping stone towards a worse life. Nothing in excess is desirable. THE ULTIMATE TRUTH They say, love is greater than money, and then struggle for money. They say, money is greater than love, and then struggle for love. Devoid of the circumstances, the human specie will never be satisfied with whatever they own. From being jealous to acquiring the thing of another being, nothing is enough. So, there isn’t a valid comparison between love and money. Human nature is indeed dicey.
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Love
and
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money
is a debatable thing. Choosing one over another includes quite a
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risk
along with, the consequences which
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often
occur as a surprise in one’s
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life
.
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both of them
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must
possess a pro and a con,
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let’s
go-ahead to find out.

THE TWO FACES

The one aspect of
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life
is
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money
. Imagining a day without capital is
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just
absurd, we’ve been witnessing the poverty in our
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world
since day one. No one is unaware of the fact that, to exist in this
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world
,
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money
is the fundamental
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must
-have thing and even the requirement to survive. We are well acquainted, that
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money
is an asset in one’s
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life
. The
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world’s
materialistic
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happiness
is
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only
achieved by capital. The desires, the kinds of stuff, the
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happiness
, all this
is fulfilled
with the
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money
itself.

Yet
another aspect of human
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life
is the word
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love
.
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Some
comprehend and blend it with
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money
and leads a
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good
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life
whereas
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some
, take it for granted and chases
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only
the capital. In
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today
’s scenario,
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people
have butchered the quote to
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“money
CAN
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buy
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happiness”
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Really
? Yes, it can
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buy
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SOME
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happiness
,
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but
not your entire
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life’s
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happiness
.
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Only
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love
can
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make
you feel wanted and
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important
in this
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world
. Spending time with your
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loved
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ones
is what
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makes
you satisfied and amiable and gives you a reason to be alive.

THE LESSER-KNOWN FACE

Since we’ve discussed the assets, it’s
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now
time for
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some
dark truth and the liability. It takes seconds, to
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change
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money
, from asset to liability, and this happens with a word, greed. Drooling over
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money
can
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sometimes
result in hazardous consequences. You never know what may happen, you may lose your
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loved
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ones
or even your
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life
. Working
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hard
for
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money
is the
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only
way to lead a
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good
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life
. Smart and
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hard
work is the
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only
way to surpass.

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Sometimes
,
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love
can
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destroy
you too.
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Overloving
and
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overtrusting
is a stepping stone towards a worse
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life
. Nothing in excess is desirable.

THE ULTIMATE TRUTH

They say,
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love
is greater than
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money
, and then struggle for
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money
. They say,
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money
is greater than
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love
, and then struggle for
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love
. Devoid of the circumstances, the human specie will never
be satisfied
with whatever they
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own
. From being jealous to acquiring the thing of another being, nothing is
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enough
.
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So
, there isn’t a valid comparison between
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love
and
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money
. Human nature is
indeed
dicey.
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IELTS essay what do you think is better love vs money?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
402 words
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