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what do you think could have been better to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak ?

what do you think could have been better to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak? BM2b6

Well, i thhink Covid-19 is one of the most serious pandemic I have ever seen and battling with them has never been an easy thing to do. However, in order to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak, first of all, i think every citizen must have a common sense of the community that protecting their health is also protecing others to ensure all of them take approriate precautions. And second of all, the goverment should do a good job at undertaking nationwide lockdown to make sure their citizen safe before everything gets worse.

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think
 every citizen This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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gets
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