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what do you think could have been better to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak ?

what do you think could have been better to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak? BM2b6
Well, i thhink Covid-19 is one of the most serious pandemic I have ever seen and battling with them has never been an easy thing to do. However, in order to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak, first of all, i think every citizen must have a common sense of the community that protecting their health is also protecing others to ensure all of them take approriate precautions. And second of all, the goverment should do a good job at undertaking nationwide lockdown to make sure their citizen safe before everything gets worse.
Well, i
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thhink
Covid-19 is one of the most serious pandemic I have ever
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seen
and battling with them has never been an easy thing to do.
However
, in order to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak,
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first of all
,
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i
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think
every citizen
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must
have a common sense of the community that protecting their health is
also
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protecing
others to ensure all of them take
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approriate
precautions. And second of all, the
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goverment
should do a
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good
job at undertaking nationwide lockdown to
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make
sure their citizen safe
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before
everything
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gets
worse.

IELTS essay what do you think could have been better to deal with the Coronavirus outbreak?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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