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What do you like to do with your classmate

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I enjoy reading with my classmates in the presence of others. It could be after every lesson or on weekends. We'll read those books and novels together and maybe books about science and technology and culture in history. We would read in university libraries, in parks, in cafés. Reading helps us to relax, to grow in knowledge, also tries to be magnetic and to see the world around us in a delightful and multidimensional way.

I enjoy reading with my classmates in the presence of others. It could be after every lesson or on weekends. We'll read those books and novels together and maybe books about science and technology and culture in history. We would read in university libraries, in parks, in cafés. Reading This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us to relax, to grow in knowledge, also
 tries to be magnetic and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the world around us in a delightful and multidimensional way. 

IELTS essay What do you like to do with your classmate

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