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What do you do when you fell homesick

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With people who elderly or students is far away their families not escape felling homesick. I am a student and go study abroad in laos. So, i always fell homesick, especially in the first time i have gone laos. in order that i fell better and can go through that challenge. i decided to do something which is myself have ambition. i usually call my mother and share, talk every think which happened with me to my mom. or, i search some foreign songs on YouTube to listen it. sometimes, i have easily way to decrease my feeling is learn something new, skil new. . .
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always fell homesick,
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fell better and can go through that challenge.
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decided to do something which is myself have ambition.
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usually
call my mother and share, talk every
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which happened
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me to my mom.
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search
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foreign songs on YouTube to listen it.
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have
easily
way to decrease my feeling is
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something new,
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IELTS essay What do you do when you fell homesick

Essay
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106 words
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