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What do you do when you feel alone

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It may have happen to everyone that been in a crowded room and still felt lonely. It is ok if you want to be alone anywhere, anytime but this loneliness should not be molest you if so, then look for a way. When I feel alone, I try to be closer to my soul and make friend with myself. Usually I don’t express my feelings it rarely happens to me to feel lonely because I’m an introvert and people who introvert find less or no friends to talk them and get out of this loneliness. But on the other hand, I’m a human, sometimes this loneliness can be difficult and unbearable, this is when I need love or something that makes me feel better. Usually I prefer to listen to music in the middle of the night and feel good about myself. In the end, I always trying to make myself better and be my own friend.
It may have
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happen
to everyone that been in a crowded room and
still
felt lonely. It is ok if you want to be alone anywhere, anytime
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but
this loneliness should not be
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molest
you if
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so
, then look for a way.

When I
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feel
alone, I try to be closer to my soul and
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make
friend with myself.
Usually
I don’t express my feelings it rarely happens to me to
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feel
lonely
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because
I’m an introvert and
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people
who introvert find less or no friends to talk them and
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get
out of this loneliness.

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But
on the other hand
, I’m a human,
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sometimes
this loneliness can be difficult and unbearable, this is when I need
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love
or something that
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makes
me
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feel
better.
Usually
I prefer to listen to music in the middle of the night and
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feel
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good
about myself.

In the
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end
,
Did you mean "I'm always trying", "I am always trying" or "I was always trying"?
I always trying
to
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make
myself better and be my
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own
friend.

IELTS essay What do you do when you feel alone

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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