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What do you do when you feel alone

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It may have happen to everyone that been in a crowded room and still felt lonely. It is ok if you want to be alone anywhere, anytime but this loneliness should not be molest you if so, then look for a way. When I feel alone, I try to be closer to my soul and make friend with myself. Usually I don’t express my feelings it rarely happens to me to feel lonely because I’m an introvert and people who introvert find less or no friends to talk them and get out of this loneliness. But on the other hand, I’m a human, sometimes this loneliness can be difficult and unbearable, this is when I need love or something that makes me feel better. Usually I prefer to listen to music in the middle of the night and feel good about myself. In the end, I always trying to make myself better and be my own friend.

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happen
 to everyone that been in a crowded room and still
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but
 this loneliness should not be Consider using a past participle here: "molested".molested
molest
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so
, then look for a way.

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feel
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make
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feel
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because
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people
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get
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on the other hand
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sometimes
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love
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makes
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feel
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feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 about myself.

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end
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