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What challenges posed by covid-19 pandemic?

What challenges posed by covid-19 pandemic? rkre6
The unprecedented challenges posed by the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19) pandemic are too multitudinous to mention them all, but there are three important ones worth mentioning: the health system, the global economy, and the social concerns. In the first place, the pandemic's fast expansion has compelled governments to develop vaccines and medications for the ill as soon as possible. Simultaneously time, having adequate staff and competence to treat patients when the number of infections rose significantly provides a problem for the health system.
The unprecedented challenges posed by the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19) pandemic are too multitudinous to mention them all,
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expansion has compelled
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governments
to develop vaccines and medications for the ill as
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Simultaneously
time, having adequate staff and competence to treat patients when the number of infections rose
significantly
provides a problem for the health system.

IELTS essay What challenges posed by covid-19 pandemic?

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