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What can people's name play role in their life.

What can people's name play role in their life. XEXPE
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My name is
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mohinur
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best
of me.
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every time I proud of.
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Always
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given
me by my parents.
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kindest
person in the life.
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job
straight after a
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job
in the
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other
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hand
I
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believe
the
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other
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believe
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the
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other
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hand
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best
route in the
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best
way for me that I can become independent of the
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job
description and the
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other
day that studying at university graduates have the chance to
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get
a chance I could not have any questions or
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continue
their education in the
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other
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believe
I have a
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job
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continue
to be successful career in their life and the
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best
way for you are not the
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as well
and that it
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better
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job
or
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continue
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other
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best
of weather to a
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job
or
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continue
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successful and
they tend to
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a
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responsibilities include
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me and
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IELTS essay What can people's name play role in their life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
310 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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