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What are the reasons and solutions for the increasing rate of young offenders?

What are the reasons and solutions for the increasing rate of young offenders? m90bq

In this day and age, the rate of young criminals is an alarming problem and we need to have solutions for such an urgent issue. The main causes of increasing rates of young offenders are harsh life conditions and children’s lack of education, from my very personal view. Therefore, I think governmental investment on quality education and social charity activities are the two most prominent/ plausible solutions for this problem. Regarding the reasons that make the rate of young offenders increase, harsh life conditions and children’s lack of education are the two main causes. Firstly, it seems that a number of youngsters who committed crimes are from rural areas, which fail to provide their residents with employment chances in many aspects including economics and civilization. Because of that, they prefer to burglary or rob money from people instead of finding jobs to improve their life.

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