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what are the pros and cons of tourism.

what are the pros and cons of tourism. nE18e
In many countries tourism is the major of economy. There are lot of benefits of visiting other areas of the country or outside the country, We got a chance to relax our 24 our busy life and also we become source of job for others in the way of tourist. Although tourism has many benefits but also it is a cause of difficulties for the local communities. Through the tourist activities we are connected with the world and most of the countries develop a more building and parks to attract the tourist around the world. When we visit any other area we get a chance to explore other communities. We met to different cultured people and learn different things from them. When we travel in anywhere it become a source of income for our own country and other country like when we plan to go somewhere to visit than we go shopping according to the destination weather situation. And when we went to the other countries as tourist, we spend more than usual in everything like we eat and shop more than usual and also visit many places as we can. Most of the times tourist get the problem for the local community due to access tourist and sometimes people who were working in their fields and food and other eatable things they left their jobs and become a tour guide because they earned more many like this rather than work in the fields. In the result of food prices are increasing rapidly due to shortages in the local market. Many people are inspired by the tourist and leaving their own custom season by season. Many local are cut down the trees to build a hotel and camping. Although tourism is a good thing for everyone but it came thorough with significant disadvantages. If we have not set some rule for the tourist it would be cause of many difficulties for the native peoples.
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tourism is the major of economy. There are
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lot of
benefits of visiting
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areas of the
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country
or outside the
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country
, We
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got
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relax our 24 our busy life and
also
we become source of job for others in the way of
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tourist
. Although tourism has
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many
benefits
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but
also
it is a cause of difficulties

for the
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local
communities.

Through the
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tourist
activities we
are connected
with the world and most of the
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countries
develop a more building and parks to attract the
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tourist
around the

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world
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we visit any
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area we
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get
a chance to explore
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other
communities. We met to
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different
cultured
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people
and learn
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things from them.

When we travel in anywhere it
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a source of income for our
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and
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other
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like when we plan to go somewhere to visit than we go shopping

according to the destination weather situation.

And when we went to the
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other
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countries
as
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, we spend more than usual in everything like we eat and shop more than usual and
also
visit
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places

as we can.

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tourist
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get
the problem for the
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community due to access
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tourist
and
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sometimes
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people
who were working in their fields and food and other

eatable things they
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left
their jobs and become a tour guide
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because
they earned more
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like this
rather
than work in the fields. In the result of food prices are

increasing
rapidly
due to shortages in the
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local
market.

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people
are inspired
by the
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and leaving their
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own
custom season by season.
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local
are
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cut
down the trees to build a hotel and camping.

Although tourism is a
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good
thing for everyone
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but
it came thorough with significant disadvantages. If we have not set
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some
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rule
for the
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it would
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be


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cause
of
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difficulties for the native
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IELTS essay what are the pros and cons of tourism.

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
324 words
5.5
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