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Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem? 2ll2A
Teenagehood is the most delicate period of any individual's life. It is undouted that they often face lots of teenage problems and hesitate which can share with their parent or the others, such as tutors, can play a essential role to solve their ploblems. This essay will exlpore the matter and suggest some solution to solve this one. To start with, adolescents face enormous difficulties in acedemic and extracurricular activities. To tackle this, some sport event or camping could be held by the education organization at leats once a month. As a result, teenagers can develop their trait or abilities as well as team-work, team- spirit, co-ordination or tolerance. For example, adolescent are able to participate in some sports clubs, events which improves their stamina and flexibility. Beside, teens can also enhance their socia skill which is important for them in the future. Anothers problems that teenagers could face is that educator may be partilly dealing with only some students, therefore some of the others are unable to understand diffirent technical subject as well as mathematics and physic. Consequently, students not only ashamed with their friend but they also stressful with their parent who only concertrate on their virtual mark. To solve this matter, the parents should provide children allowance to choose their catagory of interest in studying. The guardian should also spend enough time with their child to tell them about their traditions, custom and family history. Adolescents can gain knowledge about their traditions, customs and family history, moreover teenagers could feel less expression which is essential for them to be more concertrate on studying or others. In conclusion, teenage years is the most delicate years of a person life, however teens have to cope with many issue in the teenagehood. The reason are the presure of getting high score, especially the one from the parents. The adolescent will be suufered without the support of parent. I take the view that the responsibility lies with parents.
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Teenagehood
is the most delicate period of any individual's life. It is
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undouted
that they
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often
face lots of teenage problems and hesitate which can share with their
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parent
or the others, such as tutors, can play
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a
essential role to solve their
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ploblems
. This essay will
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exlpore
the matter and suggest
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some
solution to solve this one.

To
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start
with,
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adolescents
face enormous difficulties in
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acedemic
and extracurricular activities. To tackle this,
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some
sport
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event
or camping could
be held
by the education organization at
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leats
once a month.
As a result
,
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teenagers
can develop their trait or abilities
as well
as team-work, team- spirit, co-ordination or tolerance.
For example
,
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adolescent
are able to participate in
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some
sports clubs,
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events
which
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improves
their stamina and flexibility. Beside, teens can
also
enhance their
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socia
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skill
which is
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important
for them in the future.

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Anothers
problems that
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teenagers
could face is that educator may be
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partilly
dealing with
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only
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some
students,
therefore
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some of the
others are unable to understand
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diffirent
technical subject
as well
as mathematics and physic.
Consequently
, students not
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only
ashamed with their friend
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but
they
also
stressful with their
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parent
who
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only
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concertrate
on their virtual mark. To solve this matter, the
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parents
should provide children allowance to choose their
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catagory
of interest in studying. The guardian should
also
spend
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enough
time with their child to
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tell
them about their traditions, custom and family history.
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Adolescents
can gain knowledge about their traditions, customs and family history,
moreover
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teenagers
could feel less expression which is essential for them to be more
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concertrate
on studying or others.

In conclusion
, teenage years is the most delicate years of a person life,
however
teens
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have to
cope with
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many issue
in the
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teenagehood
. The reason
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are
the
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presure
of getting high score,
especially
the one from the
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parents
. The
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adolescent
will be
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suufered
without the support of
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parent
. I take the view that the responsibility lies with
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parents
.
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IELTS essay Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

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327 words
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