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What are the effects of electronic devices on our health?

What are the effects of electronic devices on our health? 5GLm

Grafting new researcher’s demonstrations onto our nowadays modern facts about electronic devices showed that despite of their indisputable advantages they have enormous negative effects on our health. They are the reason of uncountable health issues in both physical and mental aspects. Everyday use of these devices in long period of time is unpredictable so the high energy blue light that touch screen emit is the most important cause of permanent eye damage in our society. At the other end of continuum, full access to electronic devices has caused immobility which is one of the main element of overweight and obesity. in the other hand, electronic devices have already influenced people preferences in their social manner and lead to aggressive and out of order behavior. Overuse of these devices have badly affected on family relationships and also separated friendship communities and lead to huge deployment of isolation in all around the world.

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